BIBLIOTHECA
SACRA 154 (July-September 1997): 297-319
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THE STRUCTURE AND UNITY
OF ECCLESIASTES
James S. Reitman
Perhaps no books of the Bible have had more
potential to
disrupt complacency in the reader than the
Wisdom books of Job
and Ec clesiastes, both of
which touch centrally on the "seeming
inequalities of divine
providence."1 However, while the argu-
ment of Job can be
persuasively shown to have a cohesive literary
structure, dramatic progression, and resolution,2
Ecclesiastes
seems poorly connected and has led a number of
commentators to
conclude that "in general no progression of
thought from one sec-
tion to another s
discernible."3 Adding to the difficulty of tracing
James
S. Reitman is a physician at
Force
Base,
1 "The Scope and Plan
of Ecclesiastes," Biblical Repertory and
29
(July 1857), 423-24, reprinted in Reflecting
with Solomon: Selected Studies on
the Book of Ecclesiastes, ed. Roy B. Zuck [
most interesting to observe the harmony of the grand
lessons inculcated by Job and
by Ecclesiastes. No two books could well be more
unlike in their style and method
of discussion. The problem upon which they are
engaged is one of the most perplex-
ing of human life. They
approach it, too, from quarters the most diverse. And yet
the principles which underlie their solutions are
identical" (ibid.). This thematic
affinity is also noted by J. Stafford Wright,
"Introduction to Ecclesiastes,"
reprinted in Reflecting
with Solomon, 167-68.
2 See Greg W. Parsons,
"Guidelines for Understanding and Proclaiming the Book
of Job," Bibliotheca Sacra 151 (1994): 395-98.
Cf. Greg W. Parsons, "The Structure
and Purpose of the Book of Job," Bibliotheca Sacra 138 (1981): 139-57
(reprinted in
Sitting with Job: Selected
Studies on the Book of Job, ed. Roy B. Zuck [Grand I
Rapids:
Baker, 1992, 7-33).
3
R. N.
Whybray, Ecclesiastes,
New Century Bible Commentary (
Eerdmans,
1989), 17.
Roland Murphy discusses the marked variability of outlines
that have been proposed (Ecclesiastes, Word Biblical
Commentary [
Word,
1992, xxxv-xli:, and Michael A. Eaton notes the
tendency of most commenta-
tors to see "the Preacher's
work as a string of unrelated meditations. A. G. Wright
lists twenty-three commentators who virtually abandon
the task of seeking coher-
ence in the book. . . . this list could easily be enlarged" (Ecclesiastes, Tyndale
Old
Testament
Commentaries [
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1997
the thread of Qoheleth's
argument is the uniqueness of the He-
brew, which makes it difficult to trace the historical
context of the
book.4
Of greater concern to the average reader,
however, is the
book's generally cynical tone, which tends to pull the
reader to-
ward despair throughout; this is only reinforced by
the book's
main theme of futility ("vanity," KJV).5
Such ostensible nihilism
has made it difficult for many commentators to
accept Ecclesi-
astes as establishing a
positive pattern for living;6 in fact the ap-
parently contradictory
reflections encountered in the argument
in both close (cf.
7:1
with 9:4) contexts often seem more consistent with strains of
modern existentialism than with the theology of the
rest of Scrip-
ture.7 The strength of these
concerns has made all the more im-
4Eaton is typical in
stating "that the linguistic data show that Ecclesiastes does
not fit into any known section of the history of
the Hebrew language. . . .The lan-
uage . . . does not at
present provide an 'adequate resource for dating"
(Ecclesiastes,
19).
Whybray, however, claims that "Qoheleth's Hebrew has all the
J
[larks of lateness," that is, third century B.C. (Ecclesiastes, 4).
Fortunately, as with
t be Book of Job (Parsons, "Guidelines for
Understanding and Proclaiming the Book
(f Job," 407-8), the timeless nature of the author's
message may well leave the in-
terpretation largely uncompromised
by uncertainty over the specific historical
context or immediate audience.
5The precise meaning of lb,h, ("vanity,"
KJV; lit., "breath") is widely debated
(Murphy, Ecclesiastes,
lviii-lix). The frequently associated construction,
"grasp-
ing for the wind,"
supports a sense of frantic but completely empty effort in life.
the translation "futility" is probably
best, while recognizing that there are other
relevant nuances, especially "absurd"
(ibid.), "frustrating," or "disappointing." Of
the thirty-seven or thirty-eight occurrences in Ecclesiastes
(Murphy, Ecclesi-
astes, 89, n. 9b),
twenty-nine are found in the first half plus the inclusion in 12:8,
"vanity of vanities" (cf. 1:2).
6 This is reviewed by Whybray, Ecclesiastes,
24-28, and Eaton, Ecclesiastes, 36-
40. "The bulk of the book, everything but
[the] two final verses, represents a bril-
ant, artful argument for the way one would look at
life-if God did not playa di-
rect, intervening role in
life and if there were no life after death. The view pre-
sented ought to leave you
unsatisfied, for it is hardly the truth. It is the secular, fa-
talistic wisdom that a
practical. . . atheism produces. When one relegates God to a
osition way out there away from
us, irrelevant to our daily lives, then Ecclesiastes
the result. The book thus serves as a reverse
apologetic for cynical wIsdom; it
( rives its readers to look further because the
answers that the 'Teacher' of Ecclesi-
estes gives are so
discouraging" (Gordon D. Fee and Douglas Stuart, How to Read
the Bible for All It's Worth [
However,
C. Stephen Evans has outlined certain evangelical misconceptions
bout existentialism and has proposed some legitimate
parallels between biblical
Christianity
and certain aspects of existentialism (Existentialism: The Philosophy
of Despair and the Quest for Hope [
defense of such a view as applied to Ecclesiastes,
see Ardel B. Canedy,
"Qoheleth-Enigmatic Pessimist or Godly Sage?" reprinted
in Reflecting with
Solomon,
81-113.
The Structure and Unity of Ecclesiastes 299
perative the task of identifying
a unified, coherent message in the
text, so that Whybray has
issued the following challenge.
Since Ecclesiastes is evidently not a single
systematic treatise in
which there is a progression
from a set of premises to a logical
conclusion, it remains to be
considered in what other sense it
might be, a unified
composition. . . . It deals with a number of dis-
tinct, though related,
topics. If it could be shown that these have
been an arranged in some
kind of logical order by Qoheleth himself,
this would greatly assist
the understanding of his thought.8
In reflecting on this challenge one should also
weigh the in-
ternal claim that the author
"pondered and sought out and set in
order" his "words of truth" from a
reliable source (12:9-11, NKJV).
This
is supported by Qoheleth's strategic insertion of
hortatory
pericopae throughout the book,
particularly his repeated appeals to
enjoyment and his injunctions to "fear
God." Moreover, the
frequent mention of "good/goodness,"
"wisdom/wise" (fifty-one
times each) seems to offer an optimistic
countercurrent to balance
the apparent nihilism that pervades most of the
argument. The
reader is thus challenged to discover how the apparent
contradic-
tions and the often
juxtaposed cynical and optimistic reflections
might be reconciled by the book's literary
composition, and to es-
tablish the basis for Qoheleth's apparent "attack on conventional
wisdom."9
Is there a coherent argument woven into the
textual design, or
is it a literary "patchwork quilt"10
composed of various random
reflections, aphorisms, and exhortations? This
article seeks to
elucidate the book's distinctive literary
structure and track the
author's reasoning by appealing to those elements
of textual de-
sign that attest a coherent argument.11
To this end it is essential
to study the ways the author used key terms and
phrases, or "con-
structions,"12 in order to get a
sense of the semantic range em-.
8 Whybray,
Ecclesiastes, 19.
9 Murphy, Ecclesiastes, lxi-lxiv; cf. lxii. Qoheleth's approach is actually co.n-
cerned with "the limit
set to wisdom. As he points to the futility of all human life
'under the sun' wisdom too is shown to be inadequate. . . . Wisdom
given by God,
acted out in the presence of God, is allowed;
autonomous, self-sufficient wisdom as
a remedy to mm's plight 'under the sun' is
disallowed" (Eaton, Ecclesiastes,
47).
Also
see note 3tl.
10 This is prec isely the question asked by
Derek Kidner, The Wisdom of
Proverbs,
Job, & Ecclesiastes (Downers Grove, IL: InterVarsity, 1985), 106-10, and it must be
answered before one can arrive at a reasonable
interpretation.
11 The hermeneutical
approach promoted in this article is similar to that sug-
gested for the Book of Job by
Parsons, "Guidelines for Understanding and Pro-
claiming the Book of Job."
12 The use of 'constructions"
in this overview refers primarily to those terms and
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ployed by the author in each
case-whether the use is "technical"
(referential in every case to one specific concept) or in
fact more
flexible.13
Unfortunately many of the same Hebrew terms are
often
rendered in different ways in English throughout
the text, thus
obscuring the meaning. While some variation is
attributable to
legitimate uncertainty over the historical
linguistic context,
some recurring constructions that were obviously
meant to denote
the same referent have been variably
translated-even m the
same version of .the Bible--which is disconcerting
for the reader
trying to determine the author's Intended sense.14
Qoheleth typically employed
certain specific constructions as
opening and closing structural markers to help
divide the argu-
ment into discrete paragraphic units (each with a unifying, co-
herent thought) and to assist
the reader in recognizing and track-
ing the evolving trajectory
of the argument. Pronounced changes
in the tone and emphasis of the author's
reflections encountered
in the course of the "narrative" are
also intended by the author to
be recognized as literary transitions even though
they may pro-
voke reader confusion, or
even disillusionment.15 This recogni-
tion is often facilitated in
the course of the argument by the au-
thor's use of associated
constructions that display textual clues or
"type traits" that enable the reader to identify
variation in the au-
thor's expressive purpose.16
phrases whose "role in the text is so
central to what the author is saying that the
author includes in the immediate contextual
development what is needed to clarify
and to specify all that he intends" (Elliott E.
Johnson, Expository Hermeneutics:
An Introduction [
13 See Grant R. Osborne's
discussion of sense and reference, structural linguis-
tics, and guidelines for the study of key words in The Hermeneutical Spiral
(Downers
Grove, ll..: InterVarsity, 1991),76-78,89-92.
14 Examples of
mistranslation will be considered as the intended connections be-
tween recurring constructions
are progressively elucidated in this article.
15 In narrative structure
"speakers. ..must be interpreted in terms of who
they
are, from what position they speak, and what they
say. Some statements must be
viewed as having a negative contribution and other[s]
. . . as contributing positively
to the message of the book. Such considerations
are particularly important in the
interpretation of Job and
Ecclesiastes" (Johnson, Expository Hermeneutics, 208).
16
"Expressive
purpose" refers to the author's use of a particular literary style or
genre to express his message to the audience and is
closely related to Johnson's use
of the term "type of meaning" (ibid.,
87-96). The accurate determination of the au-
thor's expressive purpose
depends first on the readers' accurate recognition (the
initial step in hermeneutics) of the
"type-traits" or literary elements of the in-
tended "type of meaning" (ibid.). Inadequate
attention to variation in expressive
purpose in the course of a book's argument may
underlie some of the existing con-
fusion over the structure and unity of the book. For
example recognition of the rad-
ical change in literary
style and thematic emphasis from chapter 6 to chapter 7 is
The Structure and Unity of Ecclesiastes 301
QOHELETH'S USE OF TERMS IN THE ARGUMENT
Certain recurring terms emerge as literary keys
to guide the
reader as the argument unfolds. The author recounted
the find-
ings of reflective
investigation into the significance of man's la-
bor (1:3, 13; 3:9-10;
less events that seem to characterize life
"under the sun."17
Specifically
Qoheleth sought to find out what "profit"
or "advan-
tage"18 there could possibly be
to man's "labor ,"19 when it seems to
yield only “misery" ("adversity,"
"evil"20) for man all his life.
Against
thif, background of misery the author scrutinized life
for
any evidence of "goodness" or
"good" that can give people a sense
of satisfaction or fulfillment.21 Qoheleth underscored the para-
doxical natl'.re
of his observations of life by periodically juxtapos-
ing contrasting terms, such
as "good[ness]" and "misery" (cf.
important in discerning the pivotal change in
expressive purpose in the second
half of the book (Hans Finzel,
Opening the Book [Wheaton, IL:
Victor, 1987], 115-16).
17 The phrase "under
the sun" is a trademark of Qoheleth and is
closely related to
the concept of futility. It occurs twenty-nine
times and projects the perspective of
man alone, using his own wisdom and senses in the
realm of "this world" alone. The
phrases "under heaven" (cf. esp.
bly synonymou
s (Eaton, Ecclesiastes, 44).
18 Qoheleth
used one Hebrew word group (rteyo/NOrt;yi/rtAOm, only in Eccles.) as the pri-
mary vehicle to convey the
concept of some "advantage" or "point" to man's effort
(Whybray, Ecclesiastes,
36-37) in 1:3; 2:11; 3:9,19; 5:9,16; 6:8,11; 7:11,12; 10:10. (A
similar meaning is encountered in
entirely techm :al,
however, as the word group occasionally means "excessively" or
"exceeds" (
19 Qoheleth
u ged two virtually
interchangeable word groups for man's labor, "toil"
(lmAfA/lmefA thirty-four times) and
"task" (hnAfA/NyAn;fi eight times, only in
Eccles.), as illus-
trated by their parallel use
in 2:22-23 and 3:9-10. The sense is that of man's striving
with great trouble and diminishing return, thus
reflecting the same kind of "toil" (although
by a different Hebrew word) with which man was
cursed in Genesis
20The Hebre
hfArA is literally
"evil" or "bad," but in Ecclesiastes it usually con-
notes
misery or adversity (2:21; 5:13, 16; 6:1; 7:14; 8:6; 9:12; 10:5, 13; 11:10;
12:1), rather
than moral evil. Nonetheless a number of other
words-derived from the same He-
brew root for evil (frA)--are encountered in
Ecclesiastes with a predominantly
moral connotation. these are
clustered predominantly in Ecclesiastes 7:15-9:3 (esp.
8:2-15), where Qoheleth
discussed the nature and consequences of man's depravity.
21The word'
goodness," hbAOF (4:8;
meaning" in all but
fied" (fbaWA, 1:8; 4:8;
hbAOF in 6:3 6- 7 and help to
define the intended meaning; unfortunately the NASB
renders it “good things" in 6:3, 6. The
related "good" or "better" (bOF) occurs as an
adjective or gerund forty-four times, usually, but
not always, with a similar non-
moral existential connotation. Two other related
words--"sweet" (hqAUtm;/qOtmA) in
and 11:7, and 'to be made good" (bFayA) in 7:3 and 11:9-ean be translated "satisfying"
and "to be edified," respectively.
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1997
1:2-3;
"light" and "darkness."22
Although people hope that their labor will
produce works" of
abiding value, they cannot tell in this life
under the sun whether
this is so, for ultimately these works find lasting
meaning only
within the unfathomable "work" (same word)
of God.23 Since an
individual cannot discover which efforts will be
blessed with
meaning (11:5-6), present fulfillment can derive
only from
one's God-given "portion" ("lot,"
"heritage").24 The reader is thus
repeatedly exhorted to enjoy his lot in life,25
even though
mankind lacks the innate capacity to be
satisfied with this her-
itage (6:1-7).
Qoheleth's quest led him to
explore the roots of this "existen-
tial inability," and he
found that it is attributable to three natural )
limitations: man's inherent uncertainty, mortality,
and deprav-
ity. The theme of
uncertainty arises early, then predominates in
the second half of the book; it is best expressed
in a series of
rhetorical questions concerning what will happen or
what is truly
good in life ("Who knows. . . ?" or
"Who can tell. . . ?"26) and
their declarative equivalents (man "does not
know. . ." or "can-
22
Although "light" and "darkness" are often used as figures
of life and death in
the Old Testament (Whybray,
Ecclesiastes, 58), the figure "see light" (or "see the
sun") in Ecclesiastes connotes advantage or
goodness in life, while experiencing
"darkness" reflects the adversity or misery so typically
encountered in life. See
2:13-14;
5:17; 6:4--5; 7:11; 8:1; 11:7-8; 12:2.
23 The word
"work" (~~) occurs twenty-one times and is distinguished from the
words "task" or "toil" in. that
it refers to achievement of lasting significance (
9:7,
10; 11:5). Together with the essentially synonymous "works" (Mh,ydebAfE) in 9:1, it is
the key construction of
His
sovereign design (cf.
construction "hand of God"
(
sovereign purpose between the works of God and
man. This same connection is
seen in the Book of Job, where references to the
"hand of God" imply His sovereign
prerogative in relation to man's work (Job 14:15;
34:19; cf. 1:10b; Ps. 90:16-17).
24 Man's "lot"
or "portion" ql,He) is mentioned eight times (
9;
11:2) and bears the sense of man's "heritage" or "share"
from God in this life. Man
can in fact be satisfied with meaning if he accepts
his "lot" and exercises proper
stewardship over what God has given him. Closely
related is "inheritance" (hlAHEni);
its only occurrence in Ecclesiastes is in the
pivotal verse 7:11.
2)
The "enjoyment" pericopae are
11:7-10,
and each features the occurrence of either hHAm;Wi ("gladness," "joy";
9:7)
or HmaWA ("be happy,"
"rejoice";
in
(9:9).
26 These questions are
encountered in 2:19;
respectively. Analogous
constructions occur in
("Who
can bring him to see?").
The Structure and Unity of Ecclesiastes 303
not find. ..'27). If one can never
"know" or "find" what is poten-
tially meaningful in life, he
or she can never be completely sure
of being on t he path to experience such meaning.
The second natural limitation to fulfillment in
one's labor is
mortality. The author frequently referred to death
directly,28 but
the sense of mortality is also projected indirectly
by Qoheleth's
equally freq[uent
allusions to the limited number of "days" one
has to live,29 and by the implications
of Qoheleth's familiar,
metaphor-laden portrayal of
progressive debilitation and death
in 12:1-7, People have precious little
"time" to find meaning in
life and enjoy it before their "time” is up.30
The third and most devastating limitation is
man's deprav-
ity. Although broached in
until the second half of the book.31 Any
advantage a person might
gain through wisdom is quickly destroyed by the
innate propen-
sity to sin, which is both
extensive (manifest throughout the hu-
man race:
man’s being,
sin is most commonly depicted in Ecclesiastes as
"folly."32 The
negative moral implications of the concept of
"folly" are most ex-
27 These are encountered
in 5:1; 8:7; 9:1, 5,12; 10:15; 11:2,5 [twice], 6; and in 3:11;
(fdayA) and "find
out" or "discover" (xcAmA) express (in the
negative) the disappointing
failure of the author's attempt to
"seek" , 1:13; 7:25; 8:17) or "search out"
(rUt,
28
The concept of death is most often communicated by the Hebrew word-groups
tUm/tvAmA ("die,""dead," "death"; 2:16;
3:2,19; 4:2; 5:16; 7:1,17,26; 8:8; 9:3-5) and hrAqA/hr,q;mi
("befall," "fate" , alluding in every case to
the inevitable outcome of death (cf.
15;
29 Cf. 2:16, 23; 5:17, 18,
20; 7:10; 8:13, 15; 9:9; 11:1,8, 9; 12:1.
30 "Time" (tfe in Ecclesiastes often
(thirty-one times in chap. 3, twice in 8:5-6)
refers to the inevitable outworking of God's
sovereign, preordained purposes and
adds the nuance of inscrutability to the
relationship between God's purposes and
man's "opportunity" for true meaning in
life. It also denotes the appointed yet un-
predictable timing of man's ultimate
"fate" in
31 The Hebrew for
"sin"/'sinner" (xFeOH/xFAHA) occurs five of its
seven times (
words for "evil" with a predominantly moral
connotation, and helps convey the
sense of man's accountability for evil in 8:2-13.
32 The concept of
"folly" in Ecclesiastes is represented by two virtually inter-
changeable word groups. The principal word for
"fool," "lysiK; (sixteen times), is the
one most commonly encountered in the wisdom
literature; "the related ls,K, ("folly,"
"foolishness") occurs in
sive to Ecclesiastes,
occurring thirteen times. Whybray plausibly
attributes such
dual use to Qoheleth's
selective quotation of ancient proverbs (R. N. Whybray,
"The
Identification, and Use of Quotations
in Ecclesiastes" (reprinted in Reflecting
with
Solomon, 185-99).
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July-September 1997
plicitly developed in
of proverbs or aphorisms portray folly as
imprudent and pre-
sumptuous self-gratification.33 Qoheleth clearly intended to
identify the folly he depicted with sin (
establish that people in their own strength are
incapable of enjoy-
ing "goodness" in
life (
likely be motivated to examine the evidence for his
own depravity
(
quences of his depravity
(8:1-15).
These three inherent limitations to fulfillment
in the search
for meaning lead ultimately in life to varying
degrees of frustra-
tion or
"vexation."34 In response to such vexation people charac-
teristically redouble their efforts
to "see goodness" by attempting
to forge their own meaning in life (4:4-6: 12).
This disposition of
radical self-determination is symbolized in
Ecclesiastes by the
imagery of grasping envy (4:4-6; cf. 6:9),
presumptuous
"dreams" (5:3, 7), "vows" (5:4-6), and
"many words" (5:2-3, 7;
served ubiquity of injustice and the oppression of
those with less
power in life (4:1-3; 5:8; cf.
33The chapter's preceding "topic
sentence" (
wisdom's severe vulnerability to
folly. See Graham S. Ogden, "Variations on the
Theme of Wisdom's Strength and
Vulnerability-Ecclesiastes 9:17-10:20"
(reprinted in Reflecting with Solomon, 331-40).
34 The word "vexation" (sfaKa) appears seven times (
and disillusionment to
which life is prone (cf.
positively to true mourning
(7:2-4), it can also become entrenched and lead to bit-
terness of soul (7:9-10;
"sorrow,"
"anger" (NKJV); "grief," "vexation,"
"sorrow," "anger" (NASB); "grief,"
"sorrow,"
"frustration," "provocation," "anger,"
"anxiety" (NIV). The present writer
believes a more technical use is
intended, especially in recalling the sense of 5: 17
in 7:3, 9, and
35The figure "many words" in
5:2-3, 7 projects the presumption of a person an-
nouncing to God (5:1-3) his
self-determined ambitions ("dreams," 5:3) without any
consideration of God's intended
purposes for him. He attempts to manipulate God
with "vows"
(5:4-6) to "guarantee" that God will bless his ambitions, but only
risks
destroying the results of his work
(5:6c-7). The same presumption is recalled with
the reappearance of
"many words" in
36The word group
"oppress/oppression/oppressed" (qwafA/qw,fo/MyqiUwfE) appears five
times in Ecclesiastes (4:1
[three times]; 5:8; 7:7). Those who oppress others (4:1-3)
in their attempts to find
meaning only aggravate the futility already manifest
"under the
sun" (chaps. 1-3). Although this perceived injustice initially led Qo-
heleth to investigate further
the selfish ambition that generates such oppression
(4:4-6; cf.
sion, just as Elihu redirected the focus in Job 35:9 from God's justice
to Job
"victim's complex" (cf. 10:3). This connection in
Ecclesiastes 7:7 is completely
overlooked by the NIV's
rendering of "extortion" rather than "oppression."
The Structure and Unity of Ecclesiastes 305
sion of others, however,
ultimately returns to the heart of the op-
pressor himself instead of
enjoying satisfaction, a self-deter-
mined individual multiplies fruitless strife and
alienation to-
ward others (4:7-16; cf. 4:4) and only ends up
suffering material
loss, physical sickness, and vexation himself (
even to the point of despair (6:3-6; cf. 4:2-3).37
Qoheleth's answer to such
self-consuming vexation is to tout
the life-giving advantage of true
"wisdom."38 Yet if God gives